Final monologue: Confessions of a Cashier

My group will probably be shocked that I chose this one to redo as my final piece. I felt that this one was far more unique than my other idea and it has a stronger sense of me to it. The script has completely been redone and the informational concept has changed. The confessional feel to it is still there as well as the cashier vibe. The filming angle was changed and the lighting was adjusted as suggested by my group.

In my critique I was told that the light still needed to be adjusted and the ending needed to be more intentional.